- Having confidence. As in, instead of saying I hope I can persuade you, I said I want you to know...
- Having good transitions.
- Having good intro sentences.
- Having more statistics.
- A bit more detail.
Monday, 25 November 2013
Why Everybody Should Have A Dog As A Pet!
This is my Persuasive Writing of why everybody is able to have a dog as a pet. But I want you to read this and say I could get a dog no matter what. Except if anyone is allergic to dogs in your family. I also want you to know that dogs will always be your best friend no matter what. Now I want to persuade you to get a dog, so start reading!
Things that I did well at was:
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
Wow! That was an awesome essay! I want another dog now! But I already have 2 so guess not. I think you can persuade some other people into wanting a dog,Amber!
ReplyDeleteI have always wanted a West Highland White Terrier dog. They are so adorable. I totally agree with Meaghan. I think you can persuade someone to get a dog. I think dogs are the best pets ever!
Delete