Thursday, 13 March 2014
Destiny
Our writing unit has been really fun! This writing piece has been one of my very first more adventurous and mystical stories. Usually they are more kiddy mermaid type. But not this time. This is about a girl who's family is magical but she is not. They live in Hope but she lives on Earth. The Governor has trapped them, except for her. Wanna know what scary adventures she goes on to save her family? If
you do you should read this story now!
Somethings that I did well in this story is:
you do you should read this story now!
Somethings that I did well in this story is:
- adding lots of detail
- dialogue/ internal dialogue
- the adventure.
Somethings I could improve on are:
- make it seem a bit more exciting
- first few paragraphs to make them a bit more interesting
- a few missing verbs.
Thursday, 20 February 2014
What Kept Me Up At Night When I Was Younger?
What kept me up at night when I was younger was that I have always believed in ghosts and I still believe in them. So when I was in bed when I was younger I always thought that there were ghosts around. I thought of them so much, I thought I could see the shape of them in the air. Then again I always believe that ghosts are around you and out and about all the time. I know that some people disagree but I believe in that.
Now in these days what keeps me up at night is that I want to play MINECRAFT, or I want to watch more TV. But that is mainly on the weekend. For weekdays I just crash out to sleep because I either have read to much, or I had a long, bad day and I just wanted it to be over!
There were many reasons that kept me up at night when I was younger, but that was the main one. Now that it is the weekend I can stay up all night and not worry about anything. Have a good weekend!
Now in these days what keeps me up at night is that I want to play MINECRAFT, or I want to watch more TV. But that is mainly on the weekend. For weekdays I just crash out to sleep because I either have read to much, or I had a long, bad day and I just wanted it to be over!
There were many reasons that kept me up at night when I was younger, but that was the main one. Now that it is the weekend I can stay up all night and not worry about anything. Have a good weekend!
Thursday, 13 February 2014
Christalite Methodist Home
Today we went to the Christalite Methodist Home again. This was another moment to remember, but it was even more special this time. It was more special because this time I really got to bond with people and have more of a communication with them. Last time it was a moment to remember, but last time I never really got to talk to them at all. I was mainly running around and helping out on crafts, I barely really got to talk to anyone. So, today I will talk to you about what the main special thing to me was and, well I don't know what else to say it was all so special.
The one main thing that was special was one of the guys that I meet was very religious man and must have carried some of his most precious things. It was really special because we started to talk a lot and we had a conversation, but then he showed me a few pictures of him when he was younger. But the most special one was the picture of him in 1957 in the Singapore Police Force. To me it was really special because he has been carrying that for years and it is a part of him. Like the way he still had is business card detail with him. He even still had his police name badge with him. So to me that was a very special moment for someone to share that with me.
Today this trip is amazing and they have all been amazing and I want to do it again. Everything there is special and they are all so nice that it is an adventure that you should do with them. But never forget to always believe in yourself.
The one main thing that was special was one of the guys that I meet was very religious man and must have carried some of his most precious things. It was really special because we started to talk a lot and we had a conversation, but then he showed me a few pictures of him when he was younger. But the most special one was the picture of him in 1957 in the Singapore Police Force. To me it was really special because he has been carrying that for years and it is a part of him. Like the way he still had is business card detail with him. He even still had his police name badge with him. So to me that was a very special moment for someone to share that with me.
Today this trip is amazing and they have all been amazing and I want to do it again. Everything there is special and they are all so nice that it is an adventure that you should do with them. But never forget to always believe in yourself.
Tuesday, 11 February 2014
Fitness Score Reflection
For my upper body strength (Number of push-ups) I was below the healthy range. My goal for next time is to at least get four or over. But if I don't get four or over, that will still be my goal and I will start to practice more of my push ups.
For my cardiovascular fitness (Number of PACER test lengths) It is under the healthy range, I am even near the healthy range. But it is still a good score. My goal for next time is at least to get twenty or more. I also think I am going to get a better score because on the weekends/ every Sunday we do a sport. Like we usually do tennis and now my family is going to start going to a track and run around it.
For my abdominal strength ( number of curl ups) I did get a bit of a low score of thirty-two push ups. So at home if I have time or on Sundays with my family one of my warm ups will now be doing some curl ups to get a better score for next time.
Lastly for flexibility- sit and reach, I did get a score of 15.( stupid long legs and shortish arms) But for now on during free time or on Sundays I will be stretching down to my toes so for next time I could get a higher score for my sit and reach.
So now I have many goals to aim for, for our next fitness score tests. Every weekend or during some free time at home I will do exercises so I can achieve my goal. Lets see if I can do it!
For my cardiovascular fitness (Number of PACER test lengths) It is under the healthy range, I am even near the healthy range. But it is still a good score. My goal for next time is at least to get twenty or more. I also think I am going to get a better score because on the weekends/ every Sunday we do a sport. Like we usually do tennis and now my family is going to start going to a track and run around it.
For my abdominal strength ( number of curl ups) I did get a bit of a low score of thirty-two push ups. So at home if I have time or on Sundays with my family one of my warm ups will now be doing some curl ups to get a better score for next time.
Lastly for flexibility- sit and reach, I did get a score of 15.( stupid long legs and shortish arms) But for now on during free time or on Sundays I will be stretching down to my toes so for next time I could get a higher score for my sit and reach.
So now I have many goals to aim for, for our next fitness score tests. Every weekend or during some free time at home I will do exercises so I can achieve my goal. Lets see if I can do it!
Flight Or Invisibility?
If I had to choose flight or invisibility, I would choose flight. I would choose flight because one of the reasons is you won't be able to tire out your legs or walk so far. Also it could be faster than walking, so if you're late for a play date or sleepover, you can quickly fly there. Lastly, something bad with it is that if you fly to fast when you are down low, you can get out of control and smash into something, then get hurt real bad.
One good thing about being able to fly is that you don't have to walk to far. So if you are walking from your school to home, when your school is REALLY far from home, you can just take a 30 second to a 1 minute flight home. Not even that! Now that is one of the good perks about being able to fly.
Another good thing about being able to fly is that it's fast and you won't ever be late. I would love that because my bus always takes so long to get home, and sometimes I want to go home earlier sometimes. Also if you want you don't have to take the bus and fly home with your friends. Now I would like that!
One thing that is a bit bad with flying, is that if you fly down low and too fast, you could get out of control then smash into something that can injure you real bad. Now if I could fly, I would try to fly responsibly even though I would really like to have fun twirling around and flying fast. But you have got to look out for where you are going. You never know if you will ever get out of control and smash into something.
Now you know what I would do, as well as what are good things and bad things about flying. You won't be able to tire out your legs easily by walking far and you can fly home with your BFF's. But you could always get out of control and smash into something if you aren't responsible. Now would you like to have the power to fly?
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